Wednesday, June 27, 2018

My Imaginary Planet

Imaginary Planet Information Report

WALT write in paragraphs

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs.  You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

Candy Choco World
  • Candy cats & candy dogs
  • Chocolate pools
  • Candy trampolines
  • Chocolate water park
  • Gingerbread houses
  • Candy wishing well
Topic sentence
Candy choco world it has lots of fun things to do.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)

  • Candy choco world has chocolate pools.
  • Chocolate horses to ride on.
  • Candy cats and dogs to play with
  • Chocolate water parks to play at.
  • A candy wishing well 10 wishes a day.
  • Gingerbread houses  to live in/eat
  • There are candy trampolines to play on
Concluding sentence

  • Sugar rush
  • You will get sick
  • Your teeth will rot
  • Have to be a limit of candy
Topic sentence
Candy Choco World doesn't have much problems  
Elaboration (supporting ideas information)
  • You will get a sugar rush
  • You will get sick because there is too much candy
  • Your teeth will rot because you will eat too much junk
  • There will have to be a limit of candy because everything will get eaten.
Concluding sentence

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