Wednesday, June 27, 2018

My Imaginary Planet

Imaginary Planet Information Report

WALT write in paragraphs

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs.  You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

FUN THINGS
Keywords
Candy Choco World
     
  • Candy cats & candy dogs
  • Chocolate pools
  • Candy trampolines
  • Chocolate water park
  • Gingerbread houses
  • Candy wishing well
Topic sentence
Candy choco world it has lots of fun things to do.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)

  • Candy choco world has chocolate pools.
  • Chocolate horses to ride on.
  • Candy cats and dogs to play with
  • Chocolate water parks to play at.
  • A candy wishing well 10 wishes a day.
  • Gingerbread houses  to live in/eat
  • There are candy trampolines to play on
Concluding sentence



Problems
Keywords
  • Sugar rush
  • You will get sick
  • Your teeth will rot
  • Have to be a limit of candy
Topic sentence
Candy Choco World doesn't have much problems  
Elaboration (supporting ideas information)
  • You will get a sugar rush
  • You will get sick because there is too much candy
  • Your teeth will rot because you will eat too much junk
  • There will have to be a limit of candy because everything will get eaten.
Concluding sentence

Wednesday, April 4, 2018

Sophie Pascoe

W.A.L.T find info by skimming & scanning.



Parents : Jo Pascoe & Garry
Pascoe

She is a swimmer
Born in Christchurch

9 gold medals 6 silver medals

Tuesday, March 27, 2018

Waking up by Rylee

I'm Waking up  so tired I’m  cold.
I say ‘go away jack!!!’ I heard jack
going ‘hehehe.’ 'm not hungry but
I have to eat. It’s dark like night   
‘good morning’ said mum
‘good morning mum’ I replied.
I like getting up in the weekends
but not when there's school   
do I have to get up I think.
I looked out the window it was to dark.


             THE END.

Wednesday, March 14, 2018

Patterns - Maths

These are my people .   We are learning to carry on a pattern that grows and describe rules for patterns.
The rule for this pattern was to add a person to each pattern. The person the right side is going snorkeling so they need a snorkel.

Friday, March 2, 2018

Admiration

I found out that admiration means happiness and pleasure.

Wednesday, November 22, 2017

Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Flame

Twinkle, Twinkle, Little Flame - Quick Write 7 Nov 2017



Under the sky, the scared children chatted in small voices. Wondering what the light was ‘don’t touch it’ said my brother and guess what I did touched it. out of the lamp came a bright.