Tuesday, October 16, 2018

Crash



Walking across the bridge I slipped. In I go!





Crack! As I landed on a tree I could taste leaves. Tears busted out of my eyes





I could smell the dirty mud. Scratches, cuts and bruises all over my legs. Everything was so saw like I was burning.





I felt sick, cold and wet. I was scared and upset as I got up. It was like a mud bath. I fell again and I had no balance.





I got up again and I went to see dad.

Thursday, August 16, 2018

motor bike



Zooming past I can barely open my eyes. Wind is running towards me and bugs are flying into my face. I can smell the burnt rubber. I can taste the air. the fresh fresh air.I can feel the sun beaming upon me.I put my hands in the air I almost lost control I got back down quick. It is the ride of my life



       THE END



Thursday, August 9, 2018

Show not tell




Wow I think to myself it’s amazing I can see all these buttons one says Do not touch!! Guess what I did I touched it. I seen red lights flashing. I heard a countdown 5 4 3 2 1 0. I jump out before 0 it flew away spinning. It was dark red it had 6 windows 4 doors and purple
  Polka Dots. It never came back again.

Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Show not tell. My horrible room


WALT show not tell in writing .
As i walked in oh wow i forget what color my floor is it smells like dead fish, it looks like a horse's been in my room, the air tastes like dirty muddy water, I can hear flies buzzing around ,I can feel dirt and sharp rocks. Clothes everywhere.

Wednesday, July 25, 2018

Swimming

                    Swimming

Getting ready to jump feeling scared and  happy think I
will lose I can see other contestants They are going good
I'm not sure about this I think in my head  I here people
cheering my name And I jump I can taste the chlorine I
can feel smooth water How do you smell fish and chips
from next door it makes me hungry.
By Rylee

Wednesday, June 27, 2018

My Imaginary Planet

Imaginary Planet Information Report

WALT write in paragraphs

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs.  You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

FUN THINGS
Keywords
Candy Choco World
     
  • Candy cats & candy dogs
  • Chocolate pools
  • Candy trampolines
  • Chocolate water park
  • Gingerbread houses
  • Candy wishing well
Topic sentence
Candy choco world it has lots of fun things to do.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)

  • Candy choco world has chocolate pools.
  • Chocolate horses to ride on.
  • Candy cats and dogs to play with
  • Chocolate water parks to play at.
  • A candy wishing well 10 wishes a day.
  • Gingerbread houses  to live in/eat
  • There are candy trampolines to play on
Concluding sentence



Problems
Keywords
  • Sugar rush
  • You will get sick
  • Your teeth will rot
  • Have to be a limit of candy
Topic sentence
Candy Choco World doesn't have much problems  
Elaboration (supporting ideas information)
  • You will get a sugar rush
  • You will get sick because there is too much candy
  • Your teeth will rot because you will eat too much junk
  • There will have to be a limit of candy because everything will get eaten.
Concluding sentence

Wednesday, April 4, 2018

Sophie Pascoe

W.A.L.T find info by skimming & scanning.



Parents : Jo Pascoe & Garry
Pascoe

She is a swimmer
Born in Christchurch

9 gold medals 6 silver medals