My Imaginary Planet

Imaginary Planet Information Report

WALT write in paragraphs

Use your planning from earlier in the week to sort your ideas into paragraphs.  You may add the heading in a blue box after discussing with the teacher.

FUN THINGS
Keywords	Candy Choco World       Candy cats & candy dogs Chocolate pools Candy trampolines Chocolate water park Gingerbread houses Candy wishing well
Topic sentence	Candy choco world it has lots of fun things to do.
Elaboration (supporting ideas / information)	Candy choco world has chocolate pools. Chocolate horses to ride on. Candy cats and dogs to play with Chocolate water parks to play at. A candy wishing well 10 wishes a day. Gingerbread houses  to live in/eat There are candy trampolines to play on
Concluding sentence

Problems
Keywords	Sugar rush You will get sick Your teeth will rot Have to be a limit of candy
Topic sentence	Candy Choco World doesn't have much problems
Elaboration (supporting ideas information)	You will get a sugar rush You will get sick because there is too much candy Your teeth will rot because you will eat too much junk There will have to be a limit of candy because everything will get eaten.
Concluding sentence