Walking across the bridge I slipped.  In I go! 
Crack! As I landed on a tree  I could taste leaves. Tears busted out of my eyes 
I could smell the dirty mud.  Scratches, cuts and bruises all over my legs.  Everything was so saw like I was burning. 
I felt sick, cold and wet.  I was scared and upset as I got up.  It was like a mud bath. I fell again and I had no balance.
I got up again and I went to see dad.
 
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